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micko88

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Poems
« on: May 29, 2010, 12:38:08 PM »
share your poems here :>
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Intently

Bleeding so deeply, so deeply intense
Trying so hard to bridge the fence
Always being the last to finish
That event is what I will end, i promise

Now I’ve finally felt the pain
So long before when I see your face
Now I try to forget reality
Face the fact that you’re not here with me

Hurting someone was never my intent
But being hurt is what I should forget
Trying to see so far to set
My mind and goal to my intent

I promise that I will forget you soon
Although you are close, I remember with a tune
Every melody will always remind me
Of what I intended for us to be

« Last Edit: March 18, 2011, 05:46:13 AM by Bananafish »

 

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Re: Poems
« Reply #241 on: September 18, 2011, 08:31:31 PM »
win! lurvett!

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Re: Poems
« Reply #242 on: September 18, 2011, 08:39:51 PM »
Nice, ChungkingX. I always enjoy reading imagist-inspired poetry.

thanks and hello to you bananafish. i blame the movies. hehhe

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FORM
« Reply #243 on: September 19, 2011, 07:09:04 PM »
i was soothing in the darkness of nowhere
when I saw a beautiful form
i couldn't believe such creation could be there
in the midst of a storm


i tried to touch what i saw
though it's not called for
i tried to feel it raw
without thinking it could sore.


got addicted to the feeling
so I held it tightly
as if someone would be taking
the beautiful form from me


never bothered to care
about the sting it could bring
the euphoria was a flare
like a moon in the dim


i was up in the sky
and I hoped it won't end
i felt so high
didn't know it will rend


but it waned so fast
like a dream in slumber
knowing everthing won't last
i should've not delusioned of forever


the form was like a fiend
it slayed all my dreams
but time will be a friend
as it has always been
Be the change you wish to see...

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sindi
« Reply #244 on: September 21, 2011, 06:42:56 PM »
parang isang kandilang nakasindi
sa gitna ng malalim na gabi
nag-iisang liwanag na nagpupumilit
marating ang rurok at langit

ngunit ang masigasig na kandila
mawawalan din ng liwanag
katulad ng araw at mga tala
animo'y liwanag na naduduwag

ngunit sa haba ng gabi
hindi kayang makatanggi
ng isang kandilang nakasindi
na ang kanyang liwanag ay itabi

ngunit ilang beses mang itabi
ang liwanag kanya mang ikubli
mauubos pa ring unti-unti
liitan man ang sindi

kagaya ng isang kandilang nakasindi
sa gitna ng malalim na gabi
nag-iisang liwanag na nagpupumilit
marating ang rurok at langit
Be the change you wish to see...

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Re: Poems
« Reply #245 on: September 22, 2011, 05:02:24 PM »
got this online:


God made coke
God made Pepsi
God made me...
Oh, so sexy




God made rivers
God made lakes
God made you...
Well, we all make mistakes.




rolmfao :D
Gods are born...not made.

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Re: Poems
« Reply #246 on: September 23, 2011, 11:10:32 AM »
UNDERNEATH THE STARS


should i ever get myself surprised,
loving someone sometimes pays a price.
it’s a deal I have to compromise,
yet still I’m willing to sacrifice.

but what is the use of loving you,
if you cannot give the feelings too?
and keeping this way I know wont do
anything good but sadder and blue.

but I guess Im still be thankful that,
I may not have been your lover but
I had the chance to love and beloved,
be your good friend afterall’s not bad.

sometimes I think will there ever be
a moment in time to make ‘us’, ‘we’?
but improbable that I must see,
it will never gon’be you and me.

to God I pray underneath the stars,
that even if I may have to start.
a chance to live without all the scars
I’ll still play my part in someone’s heart.[/b]


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echos lang ;D
« Last Edit: September 23, 2011, 11:52:10 AM by christian »
kayo na may maeechos na signature.

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Re: Poems
« Reply #247 on: September 23, 2011, 11:38:57 PM »
^
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Poet kana friend? Hehe
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Re: Poems
« Reply #248 on: September 26, 2011, 11:01:07 AM »
^
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hahaha

dati pa yan friend.way back schoOl days.
tagal kO na di nagsusulat ee.
kayo na may maeechos na signature.

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Re: Poems
« Reply #249 on: September 28, 2011, 08:06:39 PM »
^
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hahaha

dati pa yan friend.way back schoOl days.
tagal kO na di nagsusulat ee.

ai my talent ka pala dyan di mo man lng nashare samin hahha
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Re: Poems
« Reply #250 on: October 01, 2011, 11:17:02 PM »
my soul yearns to create poetry once more.

but due to life's myriad minute mundanities . . .

      i do not have the time.



so let me just quote THE Nerina Pallot:


      "Maybe Love is just a Requiem for the Soul . . ."
« Last Edit: October 02, 2011, 03:00:23 AM by His Imperial Majesty, the Emperor. »
The Sun never sets on my Empire.

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Re: Poems
« Reply #251 on: November 08, 2011, 12:39:49 PM »
prolonged


it’s just this once

that i had a hard time on this.

i guess because i’m new at it.

i look at myself and feel shitty.

definitely not love,

that’s just a cheap sentiment.


sometimes i wish the heart

was like a magic slate

where you can write any feeling,

and when it no longer works for you,

you just flip the film

and it’s all gone.


life would certainly be easier.
He who knows the Law of Vibrations knows all.

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« Reply #252 on: November 23, 2011, 01:56:16 AM »
The Faucet

The faucet cried over a love
that should start but cannot
Because of the distance
of your heart to my heart
How far is the moon from earth?
A heartbeat compare to him.
We can never be. The razor that cuts
your lazy hair, the comb that you hold
often I got jealous, the soap that rubs your body
that rubs my body and the all-knowing faucet
With its hungry mouth and silent stares
Knew it as the waves knew they are destined
to come home to the shore.
Walk this room and hear
Cries of despair, longings and loneliness
From the things that you left behind
Come closer and see
That it’s me wanting you back
So I can watch you shave your face
Or wear that tie that still hangs in the closet
Or stroke your hair with your hands
Oh those hands! The very same hands
That makes me tremble
That makes him tremble.
Tomorrow,
The faucet will cry with a finality
That only dusk can bring
To cover the silence
The stillness of the four corners of this room
The same room that you slept
With, the same room that you left
Me with, and then I’ll weep myself
Not only because I am a man
Who got freed from the illusion
That he was loved
But it is my tears that you deserve
My love, my beloved,
And not from some faucet
Who cries over a love that should start
But cannot.


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« Reply #253 on: January 31, 2012, 03:34:26 AM »
part ng blog entry ko.. hirap tapusin. haha

"This has been a cycle right from the start
where every single turn
is like a stab in my heart.
I see you, and for some reason i know
this really is worth fighting for."

now the pen is in command.. i bleed one line at a time.

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« Reply #254 on: January 31, 2012, 07:28:03 PM »
Sa shrine ko po andun poems ko and a story I'm working on.. http://forum.pinoyg4m.com/personal-shrines/my-intellection-asylum/
"I claim the shadows that the Shadow may not. I am the strong arm of deliverance. I am He-Who-Guards-Unseen. I am Nameless. The coranti shall not go unpunished. My way is hard, but I serve unbroken. In ignobility, nobility. In shame, honor. In darkness, light. I will do justice and love mercy. Untill the queen returns, I shall not lay my burden down."

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Re: Poems
« Reply #255 on: February 22, 2012, 11:25:54 PM »
Kabit



Kasalanan bang maituturing kung ikay' naging pabaya?
Kasalanan bang ipinanganak akong maganda?

Dinagit ng pagnanasa ang kanyang mga mata
sa panahong binabalot ang puso ng lumbay.

Pumintig.
Umibabaw.
Sumirit.

Bahala na.
What is dead may never die, but rises again, harder and stronger.

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Re: Poems
« Reply #256 on: February 25, 2012, 09:09:54 PM »
you guys are so great!! you're sooooo good in formulating words.. sana gnun din ako.. hahaha
ehhh? PANDA! :D

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Re: Poems
« Reply #257 on: March 03, 2012, 08:35:46 PM »
may mga kagaguhang poems ako nung high school kaso sa friendster ko napost haha eh wala na fs eh di ko nasave
dying is such sweet sorrow

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« Reply #258 on: March 05, 2012, 10:22:07 PM »
 
Mga Ligaw na Kaluluwa



]Aswang ka ba?
Dahil 'di ko nakikita ang aking repleksyon sa iyong mga mata.

Pumanaw na yata ang iyong diwa.
May lamig pa rin akong nadarama kahit na ako'y kasama.

Mga ngiting huwad.
Mga sayang pangibabaw.
Ang mga luha bang iya'y para sa akin talaga?

Sana maabot na rin ng iyong hinhuha
sa bawat sandaling siya ay iyong naaalala
at binabalikan mo ang nakaraan
hindi lang ikaw, pati ako
unti-unting naliligaw ang kaluluwa.
What is dead may never die, but rises again, harder and stronger.

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« Reply #259 on: March 05, 2012, 10:54:16 PM »
ang talented talaga ng mga beki
* "Alone and loveless here, just the gay in the mirror. Just him and me, The Fairy in the Closet! We deserve each other."

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« Reply #260 on: March 05, 2012, 10:55:51 PM »
ang galin nila no?!


sayang at kakaunti ang mga manunulat sa Tagalog.
What is dead may never die, but rises again, harder and stronger.